The top prority of business is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you argee or disargee?

The

precendence

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precedence

of commerce

is

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for-

profit

with the absence of responsibilities for

community

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is one of the questions that many people have been asking and considering. Some people claim that it is important for

business

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businesses

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to make

profit

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a profit

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and they

not

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do not

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have to be responsible for society. I totally

disargee

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disagree

with

this

opinion.

On the other hand

, some believe that for some reason the

business

must make

profit

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.

Firstly

, the important thing is that they need to have

strong

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foothold in today's fiercely

competitively

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economy. Because if there is no financial strength, it will be left and replaced.

Secondly

,

profit

also

help

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some companies invest in high-tech

eqiupment

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equipment

to thrive. Thanks to that, it is possible to expand the

business

and

envolve

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involve

evolve

strongly.

On the other hand

,

i

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would hold my opinion without material wealth, they must

to

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be have

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responsibilities to society and

community

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the community

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. First of all, they need to come up with

the

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policies and regulations to protect worker's rights and access brains with lots of creative thinking.

In addition

, they should support the welfare of the nation

instead

of taking

advantages

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advantage

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of tax loopholes that

evades

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or reduces taxes.

In particular

, they defy the harmful effects

the

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enviroment

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environment

and people to create products for them.

To sum up

, despite

of

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making

profit

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a profit

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is important, it's important, it's imperative that

business

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businesses

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be socially responsible, just as their top

prority

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priority

is to make money.