The diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comarisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates the stages of
sugar
crystals
production as a final product from Change the noun form
crystal
sugar
canes
.
Overall
, this
man-made process contains 7 different stages. This
linear diagram starts with the cultivation of sugar
canes
Fix the agreement mistake
cane
in
farms and ends with cooling and drying Change preposition
on
sugar
.
In the first step, sugar
canes
should be planted in the agricultural fields and after about 1 year or 1 year and half these plants will be ripe enough to be harvested. The harvest of these crops can be done by two dissimilar methods, manual by farmers or automatically by utilization of modern agricultural machines respectively. In the subsequent stage, Fix the agreement mistake
cane
sugar
canes
must be crushed and their juice has been extracted. After that, the extracted juice is passed through a limestone filter and during the next stage that it takes place in Evaporator by use of Fix the agreement mistake
cane
heat
the juice will be converted to a kind of syrup. Add a comma
,heat
Following
this
, sugar
crystals will be separated from syrup by using centrifugal force. Finally
, the final products, sugar
crystals, will be dried and cooled down.Submitted by m.v.g1371 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, canes with synonyms.
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