your neighbours have recently written to you to you about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours, in your letter: - explain a reason for the noise - apologise - describe what actions will you take

Dear Jay, How are you now? I hope you are good. I'

m

writing

this

letter regards of your response

about

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the

noises

I made

last

night. The

noises

is

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made because I am

practicing

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a song,

because

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and because

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of that let me

explains

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explain

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the details.

First,

In two days my college has an orchestra festival.

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, I'

m

a member of

orchestra

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an orchestra

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that will perform. Because of that issue, I take more

practicing

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at

apartment

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the apartment

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to improve my vocal skills. During my

trainning

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training

, I'

m

practicing

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about

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apply

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the tones and the

musics

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music

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.

Secondly

, I don't have any idea if my

voices

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voice

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got to your room. Regards of the letter,

I'

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I apologize

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m

apologize if I

had

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made you uncomfortable at night because of the

noises

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noise

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. I would kindly ask your permission to give me 1 more

days

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to me for

practicing

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practising

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for

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the ochestra

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ochestra

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orchestra

, I will minimize the

noises

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and

also

not

practicing

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practice

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above 10 PM. I kindly ask for your permission to help me prepare my orchestra. Regards, William