your neighbours have recently written to you to you about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours, in your letter: - explain a reason for the noise - apologise - describe what actions will you take

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Dear Jay, How are you now? I hope you are good. I'

writing

this

letter regards of your response

about

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the

noises

I made

last

night. The

noises

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made because I am

practicing

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a song,

because

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and because

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of that let me

explains

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the details.

First,

In two days my college has an orchestra festival.

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, I'

a member of

orchestra

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that will perform. Because of that issue, I take more

practicing

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apartment

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the apartment

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to improve my vocal skills. During my

trainning

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training

, I'

practicing

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practising

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about

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the tones and the

musics

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music

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Secondly

, I don't have any idea if my

voices

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got to your room. Regards of the letter,

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I apologize

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apologize if I

had

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made you uncomfortable at night because of the

noises

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noise

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. I would kindly ask your permission to give me 1 more

days

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to me for

practicing

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for

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the ochestra

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ochestra

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orchestra

, I will minimize the

noises

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noise

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and

also

not

practicing

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above 10 PM. I kindly ask for your permission to help me prepare my orchestra. Regards, William

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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164 words

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your neighbours have recently written to you to you about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours, in your letter: - explain a reason for the noise - apologise - describe what actions will you take

Studies have shown that most criminals have low levels of education. Because of this many believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate prisoners so they can get a job after being released. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that mental strength is more important for success in sport. Some believe physical health is more important. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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