IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

your neighbours have recently written to you to you about the noise from your houseflat. Write a letter to your neighbours, in your letter: - explain a reason for the noise - apologise - describe what actions will you take

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Dear Jay, How are you now? I hope you are good. I'
m
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 writing
this
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 letter regards of your response
about
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to
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 the
noises
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 I made
last
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 night. The
noises
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is
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are
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 made because I am
practicing
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practising
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 a song,
because
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and because
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 of that let me
explains
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explain
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 the details.
First,
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In two days my college has an orchestra festival.
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, I'
m
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 a member of
orchestra
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an orchestra
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 that will perform. Because of that issue, I take more
practicing
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practice
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 at
apartment
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the apartment
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 to improve my vocal skills. During my
trainning
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training
, I'
m
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practicing
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practising
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about
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apply
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the tones and the
musics
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music
kinds of music
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.
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, I don't have any idea if my
voices
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voice
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 got to your room. Regards of the letter,
I'
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I apologize
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m
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 apologize if I
had
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made you uncomfortable at night because of the
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noises
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noise
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. I would kindly ask your permission to give me 1 more
days
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day
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 to me for
practicing
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practising
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 for
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the ochestra
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ochestra
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orchestra
, I will minimize the
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noises
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noise
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 and
also
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 not
practicing
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practice
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 above 10 PM. I kindly ask for your permission to help me prepare my orchestra. Regards, William

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