In many contries shopping onlines is replacing shopping in stores. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage.

As in many countries shopping online is replacing
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both sides of the argument in
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Firstly
, the benefits of online shopping,
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people can
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without tiredness. so,
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option for men. Because
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some of
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not like
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. Because
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they have no time to do that. And
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, so many apps have online shopping. An example,
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, Amazon, Uber, LV and much more.
Furthermore
, it has so many varieties. If we have some problems
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payments so there are so many options in online shopping. Actually
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easier than
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shopping.
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, online shopping resources are saved than shopping
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.
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, compared these shopping less expensive items in online shopping.
Secondly
,
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of online shopping, they display items but sometimes it's out of stock. Actually,
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store
has not
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matter, they show only stock items. An example, if we need
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furniture but
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can not get the idea through online shopping. So, in
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we can find good quality of
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. And
also
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a fast delivery.
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opportunity. In conclusion, the above information there are better for shopping online than shopping
store
. In my opinion, the government should support online shopping because it's helpful for a nation
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many times.
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Furthermore
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equal advantages and disadvantages online shopping
as well as
store
shopping
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