In many contries shopping onlines is replacing shopping in stores. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage.
As in many countries shopping online is replacing
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shops. Correct your spelling
shopping
However
, there are two sides of advantages and disadvantages. This
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will discuss Correct your spelling
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and provide evidence.
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detail
Firstly
, the benefits of online shopping, Due to
people can shopping
without tiredness. so, Wrong verb form
shop
actually
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,actually
this
is best
option for men. BecauseChange the article
the best
,
some of Remove the comma
apply
men
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the men
does
not like Change the verb form
do
shopping
Add an article
a shopping
center
. BecauseChange the spelling
centre
,
they have no time to do that. And Remove the comma
apply
also
, so many apps have online shopping. An example, Ali
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are Ali
express
, Amazon, Uber, LV and much more. Capitalize word
Express
Furthermore
, it has so many varieties. If we have some problems for
payments so there are so many options in online shopping. Actually Change preposition
with
this
opportunity more
easier than Change the word
apply
store
shopping. Moreover
, online shopping resources are saved than shopping center
. Fix the agreement mistake
centers
Conversely
, compared these shopping less expensive items in online shopping.
Secondly
, disadvantages
of online shopping, they display items but sometimes it's out of stock. Actually, Correct article usage
the disadvantages
shopping
Correct article usage
the shopping
store
has not this
matter, they show only stock items. An example, if we need som
furniture but Correct your spelling
some
we
can not get the idea through online shopping. So, in Correct pronoun usage
apply
store
we can find good quality of Add a comma
,store
furnitures
. And Change the wording
furniture
types of furniture
pieces of furniture
items of furniture
also
, they has
a fast delivery. Change the verb form
have
This
is best
opportunity.
In conclusion, the above information there are better for shopping online than shopping Change the article
the best
store
. In my opinion, the government should support online shopping because it's helpful for a nation in
many times. Change preposition
apply
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Furthermore
Furthmore
, both Correct your spelling
Furthermore
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have
habe
equal advantages and disadvantages online shopping Correct your spelling
have
as well as
store
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