Some people think that children can learn about history by visiting museums, while others feel that there are better ways to learn about history. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Everyboday
knows that Correct your spelling
Everybody
history
shows us Correct article usage
the futtture
futtture
that's why it is very important to learn children. Some teachers and families have Correct your spelling
future
diffirent
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different
method
of teaching Fix the agreement mistake
methods
history
. Some people blieve
to students if can see Correct your spelling
believe
history
by visiting museums
, they can learn better. On the other hand
, others feel there are better ways to learn about history
. Both of them are correct. İt has some reasons
Firstly
, every teacher knows students can see lessons like chemical tests so they can understand better. Some education's
research shows us if kids can see about the lessons they can well understand the lessons. Change noun form
education
For instance
, a hundred students went to visit America and they could see their culture, ekonomik system and lifestyle then
they come back, others a hundred stey their country and they riden about American culture, ekonomik system and lifestyle. the test about which way is better for learning and the result show
us, the Amerika group is better than others. İn conclusion , learning by living is better.
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shows
Secondly
, education
system shows us we can not learn hıstory only by visiting Correct article usage
the education
museums
. Because,
they don't have enough information about Remove the comma
apply
history
, they have limited. Therefore
, children should ride too much
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many
history
books. for example
, we can not learn about Moguls by visiting museums
because don't have anything about them. However
, we are able to learn about many information by
books about them. Change preposition
from
For
this
reason, reading book is so important to get understood.
To sum up
, visiting museums
or reading history
are both correct. İn my opinion, if arewe
able to use both to learn Correct your spelling
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history
that gonna be the best way.Submitted by ares.grup on
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