You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: -Explain your varied achievements over the past two years -Express your interest in growing with the company -Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion

Dear Mr Simon, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that it has been two years since I joined your company as an assistant manager of
sales
. I want you to get me promoted to manager as it has enough experience in that sector. Being an assistant manager, I have managed the stocks and
sales
of your company.
Along with
this
, the
sales
of our brand have increased since I started owing to my skills and knowledge and with regards to that I got 6 times the "Employ of the Month" reward. I have Masters's degree in business management and I have other ideas which can help uplift our products'
sales
such
as by conducting regular surveys from our customers and referencing our products to others in other ways. Would you please make a meeting schedule so we can discuss
this
in detail? Kindly let me know the timing of
this
meeting. I am looking forward to hearing your response. Yours sincerely, Gurbir
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