Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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common sense for developed

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to provide financial support to poorer

countries

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kind of supply is

benefical

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beneficial

in some specific cases,

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agree that developed

countries

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should give other types of help rather than financial aid. On the one hand, being provided a

considerble

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considerable

amount of budget is very beneficial. First of all, many

countries

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are suffering

crisis

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.

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means that some of them might not have the ability to provide the

soicety

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society

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an

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enough amount of financial support.

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to

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, in some developing

countries

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, they have enough tools and infrastructures to be able to function.

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,

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some financial crisis or in need

for

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a huge investment, giving

money

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to

countries

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that are suffering

indeed

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a huge support.

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, there are other things rather than

money

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that can help a poor country solve poverty more

efficently

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efficiently

. In the first place, lack of

infrastructures

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infrastructure

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or tools is the main cause of the problem rather than

money

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. Pouring huge

amount

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amounts

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of

money

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into

countries

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, which they can't fully make use of,

it

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causes a huge waste that can

be use

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more

sufficently

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sufficiently

efficiently

. Another point worth mentioning is that giving

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copyrights, buildings or subjects is a better way to help

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poor

countries

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food, healthcare, educational system or merriment,

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this

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can benefit the resident more quickly and

efficently

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efficiently

and by any chance,

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a better relationship between the

countries

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, giving financial aid to the poorer

countries

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is

benefical

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beneficial

,

however

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, there are more things to provide rather than

money

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to the poor

countries

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that are more realistic and helpful.