The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.

The table below gives information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009.
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This
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chart illustrates secondary and high school teacher income in Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Korea, and Japan in a
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.
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, there were three countries, which are Luxembourg, Korea, and Japan, where
teachers
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need a lot of time to achieve their full salaries
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it is the opposite with the remainder are Australia and Denmark. In the group that needs over 30
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to reach their top earning, Luxembourg
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, who have the highest salary per
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, which was 112k, started with 80k
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and reached their top limit at 139 thousand a
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after 30
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. Followed by Koreans, who possessed an average of 52 000
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a
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, needed 37
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to begin
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at 30.5k and end at 84.5k
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. The
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one was Japanese
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, who needed 34
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to raise their salaries by 34k
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from 28 thousand and had an average annual earn of 49k
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. The other group, which did not need that much time and had a lower income, were Australia and Denmark.
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who were Australian and Danish only needed approximately 8
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to reach their maximum at 48k, which was the same as the starter of Danish
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, and 54k
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respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • secondary/high school teachers
  • annual salary
  • gross income
  • net salary
  • cost of living
  • education funding
  • gender pay gap
  • teaching hours
  • years of experience
  • additional qualifications
  • economic indicators
  • average wage
  • currency conversion
  • educational disparities
  • international comparison
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