The supplied bar chart above represents the data about people living in rural, urban and town who born in Australia or outside of state between 1995 and 2010.
The supplied bar chart above represents the data about people living in rural, urban and
town
who Fix the agreement mistake
towns
born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
or outside of state
between 1995 and 2010.
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the state
Overall
, in both years the increasing
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increase
of
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in
population
is considerably higher in cities. In town and rural Add an article
the population
areas
It is apparently seen that in 2010 borning is Add a comma
,areas
decrased
.
It is worth noticing that in 1995 citizens of towns who Correct your spelling
decreased
deceased
born
in Add a missing verb
were born
Australia
is more for approximately two times than
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more than
who
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those who
born
outside of the country. In Add a missing verb
were born
the
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apply
comparison
people Add a comma
,comparison
borned
in urban and rural Correct your spelling
born
burned
areas
of Australia
are less than outside
of it Correct pronoun usage
those outside
for
about 20 Change preposition
by
percent
each.
It is conspicuous that in 2005 Change the spelling
per cent
peple
who burned in towns and rural Correct your spelling
people
areas
of Australia
are have equal near
20 Change the word
nearly
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
in cities it is still less than who
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those who
borned
outside of Correct your spelling
born
state
for Add an article
the state
same
numbers. Correct article usage
the same
However
, people borned
in villages and other rural Correct your spelling
born
areas
which
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apply
located
outside of Add a missing verb
are located
Australia
are less from
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than
who
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those
borned
in Correct your spelling
born
Australia
for approximately 10 and 15 percent
respectively.Change the spelling
per cent
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