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Today, many people spend less and less time in their homes. What are the reasons and what are the effects on individuals and society?

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most of the population spends a small part of their
time
 with their family members at
home
.
this
 essay will discuss what are the causes of
this
 phenomenon and what are the effects. there are several reasons why people spend less of their
time
 at their homes.
firstly
 it is because of hard work or studying something. we all know that our world is changing significantly, there are a lot of modern technologies which means we
also
 should update our skills and work on ourselves. It consumes most of our
time
 and we start to forget about our near ones and concentrate on our own work. Another thing is that social media or any other online streaming services by using them more than enough we start to addict to our gadgets. it is
also
 one of the main things to which spend most of our
time
instead
 of spending it at
home
 with house members. it affects several areas of our lifestyle. our
relationships
 with loved ones or any family members can lead to unhealthy
relationships
 and many family fights, which even can lead to an increasing rate of divorce among young couples,
Furthermore
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 less being at
home
 near our partners can be the main base of toxic
relationships
. addition to that it improves our ability of problem solving and independence. By being less
time
 at
home
 we start to rely just on ourselves and be more clever in solving some difficulties. in conclusion,
this
 essay discussed the main causes of being at
home
 like overworking and social media, and the effects at the same
time
 which are unhealthy
relationships
 and problem-solving skills.
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