at the present time, the population of some countries includes a reletively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the population of young people is more than the elder people in some countries. There are several advantages and disadvantages

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the number of young adults grows in different countries there will be a lot of educated and hard-working generation in

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workplaces

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, they do not have

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experience that the elder specialist

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but

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they are much younger. They are not only passionate but

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they do not

emphesise

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in the payment because they are in the stage of gaining experience and investing in themselves. But, when elders become close to their retirement

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companies have a big concern about new employment and

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why they prevent

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a person who doesn’t have any work experience as long as they can keep their specialist

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, elder groups are very

costful

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, they pay taxes in their

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as they become older they need more medication services.

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, tablets, private

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wheelchair

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and so on.

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, they need more attention and transportation options have to be provided for all aged members. Because

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they can not easily walk in steeps or use taxi and bus. So, they make a lot of financial

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government

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, adults can make a huge development in industries and companies globally. In conclusion, the population of

younger

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generation has

been

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rise

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olders

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elders. I think that phenomenon

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it happen and has more advantages than disadvantages in many cases.