The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

The plan divides into three categories that belong to the specific school in the UK which show how they spend

budget

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over one year, in three target

time

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times

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1981,1991,200. At

the

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apply

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first glance, the highest amount

between

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in

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all years is

common

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commonly

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related to teachers’

salaries

however

I

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in

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1991 is more than

others

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the others

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with 50%

then

in order 45% in 2001 and 40% in 1981. The lowest point is joint too associated

to

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with

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insurance. with

range

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a range

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of 2% in 1981 3% in 1991 and

finally

a little growth to

the

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8% in 2001. As the moderate percentage, resources e.g books sounds middle with 15% to 23% in

sequence

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a sequence

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of years. In 1981, regarding the other mentioned reason, furniture and equipment

has

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15% and other work

salaries

has

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28% as the significant amount. That

also

in 1991 is important too with 22% and the equipment shows a noticed decrease to 5%. The point. in 2001other

salaries

has

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fall

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to 15% but

conversely

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equipment displays

relatively

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a relatively

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considerable rise to 23% which is more between all three

time

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. and drop other

salaries

is still happening to 15%

that is

less

tan

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than

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other years.

In

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overall

, the

salaries

dedicated

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are dedicated

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for the most part of

cost

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the cost

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in

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for

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different

reason

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reasons

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