The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.
The plan divides into three categories that belong to the specific school in the UK which show how they spend
budget
over one year, in three target Correct article usage
the budget
time
1981,1991,200.
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times
the
first glance, the highest amount Correct article usage
apply
between
all years is Change preposition
in
common
related to teachers’ Change the adjective
commonly
salaries
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however
Linking Words
I
1991 is more than Correct your spelling
in
others
with 50% Correct article usage
the others
then
in order 45% in 2001 and 40% in 1981. The lowest point is joint too associated Linking Words
to
insurance. with Change preposition
with
range
of 2% in 1981 3% in 1991 and Add an article
a range
finally
a little growth to Linking Words
the
8% in 2001. As the moderate percentage, resources e.g books sounds middle with 15% to 23% in Correct article usage
apply
sequence
of years.
In 1981, regarding the other mentioned reason, furniture and equipment Add an article
a sequence
the sequence
has
15% and other work Change the verb form
have
salaries
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has
28% as the significant amount. That Change the verb form
have
also
in 1991 is important too with 22% and the equipment shows a noticed decrease to 5%. The point. in 2001other Linking Words
salaries
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has
Unnecessary verb
apply
fall
to 15% but Change the verb form
fallen
Linking Words
conversely
equipment displays Add a comma
,conversely
relatively
considerable rise to 23% which is more between all three Correct article usage
a relatively
time
. and drop other Change to a plural noun
times
salaries
is still happening to 15% Use synonyms
that is
less Linking Words
tan
other years. Correct your spelling
than
In
Change preposition
Overall
overall
, the Linking Words
salaries
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dedicated
for the most part of Add a missing verb
are dedicated
cost
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the cost
in
different Change preposition
for
reason
.Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
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