Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: .give details of how you and friends or family use the centre .explain why sport and leisure centre is important for the local community .describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.

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Dear Sir, I have heard that a decision has been made on closing our local

sport

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centre

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to save money . I am writing in regard to discuss the importance of the place for the local people.

First,

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every person I have known in our

neighborhood

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is currently using

this

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centre

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. I have a yearly membership of the club and every Thursday I go to the tennis court with my friends. We are all satisfied with the playgrounds too. My sister takes her kids to play there every weekend .

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watching them playing, she may have a cup of tea and read a book in the coffee shop.

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, we are all using the

centre

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in a way and it has lots of advantages for us.

second,

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since the community is fully equipped with various sites and it is a complete complex, there is no need to bother ourselves and find a place to go to. we can just visit the

centre

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right away and use any sections that we need.

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, everybody says that after attending the

centre

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, they feel very good and positive.

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, the

centre

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is helping us to have

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better mental health.

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, closing the

centre

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can have negative impacts on local people. It can

disrupts

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people's daily routines because the

centre

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is playing a huge role in our lives. we are all getting

use

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to it and without

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life can become hard since we do not know where to go for working out and entertainment . I would appreciate a reconsideration

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your decision . Yours faithfully, Mary Jane

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Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

268 words

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