The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The present illustration of the two maps demonstrates alterations of a seaside village between 1995 and current.
Overall
,it is obvious , despite the fact that the major side of the village has experienced some considerable changes with the modernization of buildings. It is conspicuous that the farmland and forest park have been redeveloped into a
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and tennis centre in the north-east part of the hamlet .
Moreover
,new apartments replaced the fish market on the southwest side of the village,
whereas
the fishing pot has been demolished and the south-eastern side has remained untouched. It is interesting to note that the ten little housings have been introduced to the west part of the
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goal
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,
while
six identical buildings have been erected to the north of the restaurant,that has been replaced the shop.And all these facilities are located along one street.
Finally
, the car park is introduced to the east part of the hotel,which is positioned in the
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segment of the suburb.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • transformation
  • key features
  • contrasting
  • developments
  • alterations
  • enhancements
  • infrastructure
  • recreational facilities
  • emerging
  • adaptation
  • population growth
  • connectivity
  • accessibility
  • preserve
  • aesthetics
  • analytically
  • livability
  • notable facilities
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