To meet the growing need for food by an increasing population, a country should make use of genetically engineered foods. However, some people believe that such foods are not only unhealthy but affect the nature too. Discuss both the view points and give your own opinion.

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population would
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created a mishap in
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nation
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should invest in
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food
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would believe that
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this phenomena
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will affect both
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health and
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To begin
with, significant growth of population around the globe could create
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market,
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so organic
food
resources would not be enough for everyone.
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oriented
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laboratory grown
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vegetables, which would indirectly help to regenerate human need in agriculture shortage.
In addition
, there are several other options which
also
can
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for
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obligations.
For example
, making
food
source from various organic materials, whether genetically altered them to grow quickly or populate in
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range of quantities.
Although
, injecting
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with
food
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could
also
reflect better
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in upcoming complications to solve.
On the other hand
, chemically originated vegetables and edibles can not consider
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or ideal choice to eat regularly.
Furthermore
, genetically produce items
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going to give crucial benefits in vitamins
not
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improve
environment
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For instance
,
this
approach will only create delusion among communities in future planning and safety.
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, it would rather
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to harm the whole agriculture sector, yet
along with
it will alter disease and trouble too. To sum too, theoretically unnatural engineered and genetically implanted
food
is
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it will rather encourage problems in healthcare and
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. In my opinion, as a
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we would have to put reliance on inorganic
food
sources to stay alive.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Genetically engineered foods
  • Increasing population
  • Growing need for food
  • Unhealthy
  • Affect
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Human health
  • Environment
  • Personal opinion
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