IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7

Modern families nowadays have to face many new problems. What are the main problems they have to deal with?

#families #face
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
It is nearly accepted by everybody that in today's world
families
Use synonyms
 are faced with enormous difficulties. In the paragraphs to come, I will mention and discuss hardships that challenge modern
families
Use synonyms
. The first and foremost problem is the influence of social
media
Use synonyms
 on
children
Use synonyms
 in various aspects of life including dressing, education and recreation. As far as I am concerned, most
children
Use synonyms
 are into social
media
Use synonyms
 like Instagram, Twitter and Facebook as they are both entertaining and interesting. Not only are there lots of companies in these
media
Use synonyms
 that advertise their products through social
media
Use synonyms
, but
also
Linking Words
 there are lots of celebrities in them that without a doubt affect
children
Use synonyms
.
For instance
Linking Words
, kids are willing to follow them in various aspects of life with no logical reason
such
Linking Words
 as fashion and sometimes youngsters choose their goal by imitating them or their movies.
Hence
Linking Words
, they spend too much money on buying clothes and goods from different companies which are gigantic problems that
families
Use synonyms
 are faced with. An additional problem is caused by the high speed of technology that really makes
parents
Use synonyms
 and kids away from each other since they can't understand each other and they have less in common. It is obvious that today's
children
Use synonyms
 are following cutting-edge technologies that every day come to market
while
Linking Words
 adults do have not enough time to follow them and tend to insist on old traditions.
For example
Linking Words
, some
parents
Use synonyms
 opine that it is necessary for
families
Use synonyms
 to meet each other frequently
while
Linking Words
 youngsters tend to meet their family and friends online through social
media
Use synonyms
. Another example is in the field of shopping
while
Linking Words
 some
parents
Use synonyms
 tend to buy everything in malls directly, juveniles are into online shopping and think that direct shopping is a waste of time.
To conclude
Linking Words
, today's
families
Use synonyms
 in
this
Linking Words
 modern and smart world are faced with lots of problems including the effect of social
media
Use synonyms
 on
children
Use synonyms
's lifestyles and the fast pace of technology that undoubtedly makes
parents
Use synonyms
 and their kids away from each other.
Submitted by yavari1993 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: