The top priority of bussiness is making money, and they do not have social responbilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Some

inviduals

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individuals

believe that the top priority of

bussiness

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business

is making

money

and they do not have social

responbilities

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responsibilities

. I absolutely disagree with

this

statement.

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essay will discuss why

i

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convince

that

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them that

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they

also

need to have social

responbilities

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responsibilities

. First of all,

i

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accept that making

money

is one of the

priority

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priorities

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of

bussiness

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business

, as profit nowadays is very important to us. It can make us

have

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apply

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more and more

sucessful

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successful

in

commercial

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commercials

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by

invent

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inventing

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them in some aspect of the job. When we invent something for something

you

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we

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will receive many

of

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apply

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good

result

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results

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from the inventions.

Secondly

, it

help

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helps

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us

having

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have

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more and more counterpart in

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our works

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works

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work

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. Have

further

experiences and confidence

to

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in

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each other and have some more opportunities to gain

sucess

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success

.

However

, merely earning

money

is not enough in business, you must have to have social

responbilities

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responsibilities

to the world.

For example

, if you make

money

by making some products, your customer used them and got problems with

it

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them

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such

as

got

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getting

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injured,

poisoned

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or poisoned

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or some situations can

happend

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happen

happened

then

you deny your

responbility

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responsibility

to

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for

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your products.

This

will make wrongdoing and you will be

unsucessful

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unsuccessful

successful

in business.

Therefore

, if you have

responbilities

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responsibilities

to them and find out how to handle it to the

comsumer

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consumer

. The

repution

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reputation

and your customer will increase and trust your product. In conclusion, every work

need

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needs

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social

responbilites

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responsibilities

not only

make

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making

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money

. They can help us create

the

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a

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belief

to

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in

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each other and

your

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our

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comsumer

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consumer

. More and more people will know your company or your job

then

you will be

sucessful

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successful

in business than only

make

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making

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money

and don't need the social

responbilities

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responsibilities

.