The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilites. To what extent do you agree or disagree
It is often said that businesses make an effort to generate profits
while
they do not need to have public responsibilities. I completely agree with this
notion that we should be
solve socio-economic problems and should not concentrate on making money.
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Firstly
, there is an undeniable fact that businesses play a very important role of
creating jobs for Change preposition
in
human
. Fix the agreement mistake
humans
For example
, a good illustration is Apple
Company
it develops its investment by selling more products. Nowadays Apple
is a very popular phone company
with young people. In addition
to
,it is popular to buy to use newly launched Change preposition
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apple
products that look more and more luxurious. Capitalize word
Apple
Apple
's success today comes mainly from the iPhone. The company
has sold more than 1 billion devices since its first day of launch in 2007. We can imagine that
what might happen if Correct word choice
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giant
Correct article usage
a giant
company
collapsed?
Thousands of people would potentially Change the punctuation
.
loose
their job because Replace the word
lose
increasing
manpower and new products leading to it, being famous. So who will take care of their families when they lose their jobs, which can be used to sustain their lifeChange preposition
of increasing
.
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Secondly
, since the outbreak of the COVID-19 pandemic, more than a sixth of young workers have had to stop working, and those who are able to continue working have had their working hours cut by 23%. In 2021, approximately 12.8 million people aged 15 years and older have been negatively impacted, including job loss, furlough, rotational work, reduced working hours, or reduced income. Also
, increasing pressure on women's time to take care of their children, especially when schools are closed, and their children have to study online at home. Other pauper families are hard to earn food because they have less savings and limited access to finance.
In conclusion, businesses have big responsibilities against to
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the
human life Correct article usage
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by
two reasons and both of them have Change preposition
for
the
special places and Correct article usage
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it
can be negligible.Correct pronoun usage
they
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