There have been several comp,laints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the complaints that have been made • say why the reception area is important • suggest how the reception area could be #comp #laints #reception #area #visitors #company #manager #complaints
Dear Mr Smith,
The purpose of
this
writing today is the request to find out some measurements for the increasing number of complaints regarding our front desk promptly.
After going through all the complaints carefully, I found that most of the complaints were made about no timely response to customers' phone calls by the team.Linking Words
Furthermore
, In online reviews , people explained that nobody attends the telephone for room services and outdoor inquiries about room reservations -eight out of ten calls were missed on a fairly daily basis.
Given my opinion,I believe the reception area is the backbone of our hotel. Linking Words
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, it is highly important to tackle the problem;the lack of staff ,at Linking Words
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, hiring new staff will be the best decision amind Linking Words
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situation.
I am looking forward to seeing how my suggestions translate into prompt actions from your side. Linking Words
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, your kind cooperation,from your side, would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
SukhLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite