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Research into new medicines and treatments is essential. Should this research be paid for by private companies or by the government?

#research #medicines #treatments #companies #government
Currently
in
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the world discovered many strange diseases and very dangerous viruses, the
research
 on drugs and treatment methods is very necessary. In my
opinion
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 new
research
 and treatment methods need
government
 funding The world is currently experiencing epidemics, new viruses and very complex diseases. The
government
 needs to pay for healthcare and
research
. It is necessary to break the habit of paying heavily
on
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 festivals and events.
Instead
, pay heavily in the health
sector
, because if the
government
 does not pay, the health
sector
 will be very poor. A real-life example shows that in 2019 the covid-19 epidemic broke out. The medical facilities do not have enough equipment to meet the overload, resulting in many
people
 not surviving.
This
 is one of the prime examples of not paying into the medical field The
government
 is the place for the
people
 to take refuge. Because
people
 really need the help of the
government
. Individuals or companies may still pay for treatments and
research
.
However
,
people
 will have to pay very high prices for treatment. If so, the poor and the lower class will not be treated. So only the
government
 can protect all the
people
. Without the
government
 sponsoring vaccines for
people
, the outbreak would probably have a very high death toll. After all, in my opinion, the
government
 should pay for the health
sector
, if it is left to the private
sector
 to pay,
then
 drug prices will increase. Since
then
 the poor
people
they
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will not be treated and they will gradually die if infected.
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