The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009.

The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009.
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The provided table gives information about the
weight
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of both genders -female and male- in certain nations; in the three different years between 1999 and 2009.
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, it can be clearly seen despite the gender factor, the majority of people are considered in the normal range of
weight
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over the years.
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a few numbers of females turned out to be overweight, a small percentage of males were underweight.
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with, over the showing period,
women
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had the lowest
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compared to men. To clarify, 27% of
women
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were underweight in 1999 against 22% of men in the same era. In 2004, the gap was extended to achieve 9%,
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decreased again to reach 5% in 2009.
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,
this
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was not always the case;
women
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showed 49%, 51% and 47% in 1999, 2004 and 2009, respectively.
On the other hand
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, 41% of males were at the normal
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in 1999,
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only 48% in 2004, followed by an equal percentage of
women
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in 2009. For the overweight category, men's proportion slightly overcame
women
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's by 12%,
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only 2% in 1999 and 2004, respectively.
Nevertheless
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, the percentage arrived at an equal level (19%) in 2009
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Vocabulary: Replace the words weight, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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