It is the reponsibilitiy of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement. Governments have no obligation to provide this benifits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements?

Retirement

plans

is

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a significant part of individuals, for which,everyone wants to be safe and secure in their life of old age. To provide

retirement

benefit,

government

do not have

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an obilgation

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obilgation

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obligation

for it, as it is the

reponsibility

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responsibility

of individuals to save and provide for their own

retirement

. Everyone wants their future

plans

of

retirements

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retirement

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to be secured.

Government

should have

role

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a role

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in the benefit of

retirement

for those who are under

poverty

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the poverty

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line, as per the ratio counted by the respective organisations.

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it would be helpful for those who are

in

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below

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the proverty

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proverty

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poverty

line, by providing free food products for their daily survival. Even they should provide subsidised products

,

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so that needy people could be able to buy them for daily needs in their

retirement

age. As Indian railway is

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a renound

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renound

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renowned

railway system for

their

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best service provided to the

citizens

,

apart from

this

Indian

governemnt

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government

provides subsidised fare tickets to

the

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senior

citizens

to

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travel in Indian railway.

In

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some

extend

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, the

government

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involvement in the benefits of

retirement

may be misused by

citizens

. I agree with

statement

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that individuals should save and provide their own

retirement

plans

as per their

need

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needs

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in future. In

recent

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survey done by United Nations,

that

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they came

upto

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reports done by third survey providers , in which the people who were well settled, even though they enrolled in the

government

retirement

plans

which were only provided to poor senior

citizens

of the respective country.

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retirement

plan

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plans

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should be

must

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for

the

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people who are

fillthy

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filthy

rich, rather than depending on

goverments retiremnt

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government retirement

funds. In conclusion,

to save

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and

provide

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providing

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for their own

retiremnt

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retirement

retirements

is good for each one of us. Despite of depending benefits

providing

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by any organisation. In which there will be a limitation. If we have

a

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good

saving

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savings

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for our

retirement

plans

,

then

there will

no

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limitation or any obligation of funds, as per our needs in our

retirement

.