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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discovery can made from animals experments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experiences.

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Some people believe that all testing on
animals
 is bad and should be not allowed.
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,
other
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others
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 argue that important scientific discoveries can
made
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 from
animals
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animal
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 experiments and
this
 essay will
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discuss
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the reason
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reason
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reasons
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 and
example
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about
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this
 issue.
Firstly
, the
scienties
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scientists
scientist
only
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 allowed to use
animals
 for
the
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experimentation. The human body not allowed to be
sample
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 of the
experiment
 because it is can cause many problems, cost a lot of money and break the etic code of
scientific
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.
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the
structurs
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structure
structures
 of
gene
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genes
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 and
reaction
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reactions
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 of
animals
it
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apply
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is more likely as a human. There are contain many
or
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reaction
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reactions
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such
 as feelings and
capability
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the capability
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 to adapt
in
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 the
sereval
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several
enviroment
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environment
.
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,
thye
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the
 doctor can take
a mice
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mice
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 become of sample to create
new
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a new
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vachine
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vaccine
vaccines
 or drugs to heal
variety
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 of
dissess
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diseases
. The drugs will be used for
human
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humans
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 if the
experiment
 is
succesful
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successful
 on that animal.
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other
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the other
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 hand, the
experiment
 of
animals
 can kills thousand
animals
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of animals
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 but the researchers need
sample
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samples
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 to do the
experiment
 to help people. The
goverment
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government
 and the
scienties
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scientist
scientists
sciences
 should work together
for
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this
 issue. The
goverment
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government
 can make
rules
 about no more
animals
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animal
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explotations
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explorations
exploitations
exploitation
 in any experimentation. Those
rules
 will
became
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 a guideline for
scienties
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scientists
scientist
 to
to
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do
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 the research. In conclusion,
the
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experimentation on
animals
 helps the doctor
to
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discovery
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 new
drug
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drugs
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 to help people.
Therefore
, do more exploration on
animals
 it bad dan
sholud
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should
 be outlawed by
goverment
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government
rules
. These
rules
 can help the
scienties
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scientist
scientists
for
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to
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continues
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the
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their
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 research without
do
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doing
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 more exploration on
animals
.
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