The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The given chart shows the frequency of US citizens that preferred to eat in
restaurants
from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
, we observe that the highest number of people went to
restaurants
either once or twice a month in 2013.
Whereas
, the lowest was recorded for those that would go daily in 2006
as well as
in 2013.
Firstly
, we see that almost 30% of the people were witnessed going to fast food
restaurant
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restaurants
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once a week for the years 2003, 2006 and 2013.
While
in the same
year
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those who went once or twice a month showed a similar pattern,
,
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apply
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however
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a slight decrease was observed in the year 2006 i.e., 25%.
On the other hand
, we come to know that, the
restaurants
that
was
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were
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being visited by people of the USA whether on an everyday basis or those who showed no interest at all in visiting the
restaurants
for the year 2003 till 2013 was less than 5% and recorded lowest among all others.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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