The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph provides information regarding how households consume their average weekly spending in the years 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that most families spent their weekly income on food in 1968 while
in 2018 they consume most of their money on leisure activities. Moreover
, the consumption of fuel and power was spent the least in both years.
According to
the bar chart, In 1968 families spent 355 of their earnings on food, which was the highest spending among others. However
, they spent way less money on fuel and power around 5%. Their consumption of both household and personal good
was about 8%. Fix the agreement mistake
goods
Nevertheless
, they spent 10% of their income on accommodation.
On the other hand
, In 2008 their weekly spending changed where they spent about 22% on leisure. In addition
, the families paid around 185 of their weekly money on housing while
they spent 16% on food. They paid less on fuel and power which was around 4%.Submitted by almousa1994 on
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