You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

to inform you that upcoming week, I will join your company as a marketing manager. Unfortunately, yesterday I had a road accident and now I am unable to come to your office the next week for joining. I was travelling on my bike from my home to the market for bought new dresses. Suddenly, a cat came in front of my bike and my bike slipped on the road, my left arm hit the road badly.

Therefore

, the born of my left arm was fractured. Now I am unable to travel because my home is so far from your office and with one broken hand I cannot drive.

However

, if I cannot take care of my hand properly, I will face serious issues in the future.

Furthermore

, Doctor Ali advises me to take rest for at least two weeks. It is because my arm was damaged very badly. After, two weeks I will join your corporation. Hope you understand my situation and I am waiting for your positive response. Yours faithfully, X Y Z

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9.00

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