Many historical sites and museums are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people to visit this historical sites and museums?
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site
and museums Fix the agreement mistake
sites
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attract
larger
number of Correct article usage
a larger
tourist
; Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
however
, local people are less interested. In my opnion
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reasons
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the reason
also
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in the ensuing paragraphs.
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a solution
To begin
with, people are bored visiting such
places
. In other words
, local citizens are know
about Change the verb form
know
of
their own cities Change preposition
apply
therefore
, it is not new for them. Hence
, they think that such
visits a
waste of time. Add a missing verb
are a
However
, tourist
are very excited to explore new things in Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
thier
destinations. Museums and Correct your spelling
their
histrorical
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historical
historic
site
will help to understand Fix the agreement mistake
sites
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the histroy
histroy
and culture of Correct your spelling
history
their
countries they visit. Another reason is that Change the pronoun
the
thses
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these
this
type
of Fix the agreement mistake
types
places's
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places'
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tickets
are
very expensive. If people visited once that they would not pay the higher entrance fees.
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is
In addition
, there are several solution
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solutions
of
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to
these situation
. Change the determiner
this situation
these situations
Firstly
, the goverment
should Correct your spelling
government
organized
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organise
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a campaign
campaign
to Fix the agreement mistake
campaigns
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attract
local
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the local
pubilc
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public
such
free
education Change preposition
as free
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, health care Fix the agreement mistake
seminars
camp
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camps
other program
which will Change the wording
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other programs
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. Correct your spelling
attract
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, the authority of Correct your spelling
Moreover
such
places
that
give extra Correct pronoun usage
apply
discout
or free for Correct your spelling
discounts
local
. So that, low and Fix the agreement mistake
locals
middle income
families can visit. Add a hyphen
middle-income
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, schools or collages are
give Unnecessary verb
apply
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an assignment
the assignment
assignment
to the student Fix the agreement mistake
assignments
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related
histroy
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history
that
they interact with historical Correct word choice
and
places
. Lastly
, the organazation
give more and more job opportunity to the local Correct your spelling
organisation
pubilc
. Correct your spelling
public
Hence
, they work such
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in such
a
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apply
places
and pursue more knowledge about history.
In conclusion, the government can encourage more locals by running interesting programs such
as exhibits at these locations and offering free or subsizdized
entry.Correct your spelling
subsidized
subsidised
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