Many historical sites and museums are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people to visit this historical sites and museums?

It is true that most
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historical
site
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sites
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and museums
attrect
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attract
larger
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a larger
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number of
tourist
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tourists
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;
however
, local people are less interested. In my
opnion
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opinion
, there
arre
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are
numerous
reason
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of
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this
trend. I will discuss
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the reason
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and
also
give
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a solution
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in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin
with, people are bored visiting
such
places
.
In other words
, local citizens
are know
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about
of
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their own cities
therefore
, it is not new for them.
Hence
, they think that
such
visits
a
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are a
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waste of time.
However
,
tourist
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tourists
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are very excited to explore new things in
thier
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their
destinations. Museums and
histrorical
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historical
historic
site
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sites
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will help to understand
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the histroy
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histroy
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history
and culture of
their
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countries they visit. Another reason is that
thses
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these
this
type
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types
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of
places's
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tickts
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tickets
are
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very expensive. If people visited once that they would not pay the higher entrance fees.
In addition
, there are several
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of
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to
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these situation
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these situations
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.
Firstly
, the
goverment
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government
should
organized
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a campaign
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campaign
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campaigns
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to
attrect
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attract
local
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the local
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pubilc
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public
such
free
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as free
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education
seminar
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seminars
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, health care
camp
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camps
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and
other program
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another program
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which will
attrect
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attract
.
Morover
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Moreover
, the authority of
such
places
that
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apply
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give extra
discout
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discounts
or free for
local
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locals
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. So that, low and
middle income
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families can visit.
For example
, schools or collages
are
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give
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an assignment
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assignment
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assignments
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to the student
releted
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related
to
histroy
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history
that
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and
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they interact with historical
places
.
Lastly
, the
organazation
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organisation
give more and more job opportunity to the local
pubilc
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public
.
Hence
, they work
such
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a
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apply
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places
and pursue more knowledge about history. In conclusion, the government can encourage more locals by running interesting programs
such
as exhibits at these locations and offering free or
subsizdized
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subsidized
subsidised
entry.
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