Students leave high school without learning the way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions of this issue?

In every person's life , financial management abilities are essential. Nowadays ,
students
do not have knowledge about
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their
money
when they leave
school
. There are numerous
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situation .
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reasons and
also
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on their
parents
.
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of
children
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without
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seeing
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their financial pressure or
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situations
. As
result
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, children can not learn how to earn
money
and how to manage them. Another reason is
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school
curriculum . These days, teachers
are only focus
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main
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on main
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subjects
such
as maths , science and history.
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,
students
can not
learning
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the way how to manage finance .
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, high
school
students
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to
learn
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theoretical
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subject of
finacial
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financial
management , but they fail to manage income in practicals. There are some solutions
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this
situation .
Firstly
parents
should give monthly pocket
money
that
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children can learn and
also
they
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apply
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avoid unnecessary expenses .
Secondly
,
school
administration should
be change
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the way of teaching . Teachers should more focus on interpersonal skills like
fincial
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financial
management communication skills and many more .
This
will help
students
learn how their finances should be planned . In conclusion,
although
there are some reasons that may cause young generations to have a poor value dealing with
money
,
school
education and
parents
give
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money
may have a positive impact on
this
problem.
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