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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#money #businesses #responsibilities
Many people deem that
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corporations
not
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 only just
cheasing
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chasing
cheating
 money,
they are
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but they are also
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 obliged to the populace and ought to make contributions
for
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the
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society. I utterly
agree
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this
 view, because enterprises are
the
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 vital part that
compose
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 our society. Its duties not merely
involve
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in
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the
fincial
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financial
 aspect, but
also
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 relevant to environments, citizens and
communites
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communities
. On the one hand, stemming from the
necessarity
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necessity
 of
survial
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survival
, managing higher profit that not need to be blamed.
Neverthless
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Nevertheless
companies
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recruitions
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recruiting
, expenditures of
rents
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rent
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 or payments for
bank’s
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 loans, cash is the key
of
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thoes
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those
 items. Enterprises
also
demend
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demand
 funds to pay dividends to shareholders to
mantain
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maintain
 businesses managements. Meanwhile, Among the developing progresses of firms, taking researching new production to satisfy nowadays customers’ requirements as an example, the plenty investment is a
cricial
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crucial
critical
 factor too.
On the other hand
, in view of establishments occupy a large amount of social resources,
so
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 it is accountable for social responsibilities. In the opinion of
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the labor
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labor
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 force, it is duty-bound to prove
scienceable
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science able
science-able
 salaries and treatments that make employees’ basic requirements can be settled.
Moreover
, corporations should build employees
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a system
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system
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 that offer aid when they face
chanllenge
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challenges
challenge
.
In
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 the angle of nature, that firms would be expected to use
energy-efficent
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energy-efficient
equipments
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 and ecologic friendly materials can reduce wastes affection to the public. In
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conclusion,
although
 we can not deny that the reasonability of companies approach profits , most of
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 we
recommed
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recommend
 they take public duties too.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social responsibilities
  • Corporate social responsibility
  • Ethical behavior
  • Societal impact
  • Stakeholders
  • Profit-driven
  • Public perception
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Community development
  • Human rights
  • Workplace safety
  • Altruism
  • Balanced approach
  • Accountability
  • Consumer loyalty
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