Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In
this
day and age, a lot of people
opt for travelling or working for a short time
instead
of going directly to study
college after high school
. This
essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of both methods.
To begin
with, plenty of people
believe that travel or work
for a duration of time
after finishing high school
helps them improve life skills and broaden relationships. Spending time
in real life will help a person learn lessons from reality such
as discipline, self-discipline and how to face all difficulties without relying. If students
choose to work
, they will learn from the real working environment. For example
, if a person makes mistakes at work
, they will have their salary deducted or reprimanded, which will directly affect their economy. This
will make them more careful, and then
mistakes will not be repeated.
In addition
, people
who choose to travel often meet a lot of new friends and then
broaden their relationships. Having many friends will help learners become more confident, and improve their communication ability. Thereby, making it easier for them to seize opportunities in life. However
, This
choice also
exposes people
to two main harms: the lack
of qualifications and the difficulty to catch up with friends who take the time
to go to school
as soon as they graduate from high school
. Choosing to go to work
and learn practical knowledge
is good, but cannot completely replace professional knowledge
taught from universities, lack
of qualifications will make students
lack
knowledge
leading to difficulty in development. In a study
by a Dutch reporter in 2021, up to 60% of people
who work
are having problems because they do not have professional qualifications, leading to many difficulties. On the other hand
, during that time
those who choose to go to school
right after they graduate from high school
have completed almost a third of the program. That leads to wives who choose to travel or go to work
. If they want to go back to school
, they will not keep up with their peers.
Finally
, people
who choose to go to university
right after finishing high school
will make the most of their study
time
as well as
uninterrupted study
time
. From there, they receive benefits such
as opportunities to advance their knowledge
and internships while
they study
in a university
environment. For instance
, in Vietnam,people
choose to study
at a national university
after learning specialised knowledge
at school
. If students
have good results, they will stay at the school
as a lecturer. Besides
, the school
will also
introduce and support job search for its students
after completing their graduation.
However
, continuous learning for a long period of time
will also
lead to students
lacking practical knowledge
from society. Some people
will be too dependent on knowledge
from school
and lack
real-life experience, making it difficult to adapt to the real working environment. A special example is the fact that not all scholars graduate with the same major as they studied in college, and the rate of not getting a job after graduation is not a small number.
In summary, after graduating from high school
, the choice of spending time
travelling or working for a period of time
or taking time
to start studying university
is also
up to each person's choice, However
, each option will have its own advantages and disadvantages.Submitted by teachingqa272 on
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