Some people believe that technology causes more problems for modern society than it solves. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that modern technological evolution has done more harm than beneficial to both the individual and society.

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I agree that technology has impacted human life to an unhealthy degree,

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rejecting the function of technology is impractical because it could improve both public health and education. On the one hand, our lives have become too complex with daily problems. We are now often buried with work-related email notifications, calls or text messages. Even in the young, there are numerous phone applications for students to receive and notify home

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. Another striking feature is that daily entertainment is

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linked with technological devices

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as televisions, computers, or smartphones, all of which are addictive. Science newspapers from multiple countries have shown that there is

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to human brains from over screen-time usage. It is scientifically proven that people with

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addiction experienced a decrease in grey matter volume in critical areas.

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, medical and educational technologies have been providing benefits to society nowadays. In fact,

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medical advances, doctors are now able to solve health problems more accurately than decades ago.

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, innovative medical products can now replace and sustain failing body functions, thereby supporting people in living actively.

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, the use of information and communication technologies plays a crucial role in providing a more flexible learning process. In the recent Covid-19 pandemic.

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, learning poverty was at an all-time high for most underdeveloped countries. As local schools were forced to close

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the disease, remote learning was

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deployed using a combination of TV, Online, and Laptop, which can teach thousands of students. In conclusion, despite its

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problems, technological development is still an important part

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modern society as its contribution

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healthcare and education.