You have just moved into a new flat. Write a letter to your friend telling them tthat you have moved. In your letter: - describe the reason why you moved - describe the new flat - invite him or her to your new flat

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Dear Paul, I hope you're doing well. I want to let you know that I recently moved out of my uncle's house. As you already know that my workplace,

as well as

my college, is far away from my old residence. It took more than two hours for me to go to college. That's why, I shifted to a flat where I am able to commute to both places. My new flat is on the sixth floor in the nine-storey building. There are two bedrooms

along with

that one washroom and a kitchen. There is a small balcony as well. The building comes in Malton city. I really want you to come on upcoming Sunday. I

also

invited some of our common friends and siblings. We will spend some quality time all together.

Besides

, it is over a year, we did not catch up. I am so excited to see you. See you soon, Harpreet.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

155 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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