The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of males and females in all
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ranges taking part in physical activity in Australia in the year 2010.
It is clear that
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there were more women than men doing exercise in most
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groups, except for those aged from 15 to 24.
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, both genders shared the same percentage when they were over 65. As can be seen, females joining in physical activities at the
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of 45-54 were recorded to be at the top of the list with 53.3%, followed by 53% of those being 55-64 and 52.5% of 33 to 44-year-old ones.
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, women in the youngest generation
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the oldest have the same data at about 47%,
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there were 48.9% of those falling into the 25 to 34. Regarding men, the youth took up the largest proportion, at 52.8%.
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, the figure for those decreased significantly to 39.5% as they were up to 44 years old before growing gradually again to 46.7% at the
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of 65 and over.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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