Write a letter to your local municipality about the difficulties with the dust bins in your street.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to you regarding the issues that I and the whole street have been facing for the past few weeks. There are a total of three big
bins
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in the street that are only for public use. There is no doubt,
bins
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are for people and they used them as well. But the problem is,
bins
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have not been cleaned for fifteen days. It is quite stinky now. It is hard for the public to use a footpath
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near the
bins
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.
Moreover
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, insects and flies are
also
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starting to grow in the litter. The situation will get worse during the rainy season
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about to start.
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, the problem needs to be tackled as soon as possible. I would request you to send sweepers or waste pickers to clean the
bins
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. If the problem is not going to solve soon
then
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young children, who are usually wandering outside are going to be sick. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Harpreet Kaur.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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