These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could this problem be solved?

Nowadays, there is a decreasing number of individuals who are willing to choose
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, especially primary school
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, as their future career.
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phenomenon and provide
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solutions. The main reason that fewer
people
want to become
teachers
is
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it is becoming more difficult for
people
to be professional enough in
this
career. That means there are more requirements for potential candidates if they choose to become tutors, compared with the situation in the past, because they are
compulsed
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composed
to achieve a longer time training with more
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evaluation progress,
while
it can potentially increase their cost to get those relative diplomas or certificates.
For example
, the government of China publics new
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education
regulations every four years to assure new
teachers
are well-trained with enough background to teach the young generation, and every version of the regulations is more
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than the previous one, leading to
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people
want
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to gain educational certificates.
However
, there are still many approaches to deal with
this
problem.
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a government perspective, it can address the issue by fiscal policy or other methods,
such
as providing financial
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for college students who major in education or allowing benefits for
teachers
when their siblings
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by giving them priority to choose schools and use medical resources.
In addition
, universities and other training institutions can use proper approaches to help candidates when they are learning necessary knowledge about
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education
.
For example
, a Japanese college uses an innovative way to train their students to become
teachers
by letting them get
along with
kids
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and let them be evaluated by those children to see whether they are qualified enough to become a
teacher
, rather than pre-designed exams or questions.
This
evaluation method has been highly praised by
teacher
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candidates
as it is easier than question-answering exams
while
it can provide opportunities for them to understand their future jobs deeply. In conclusion, there are fewer
people
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to choose
teacher
as their jobs in
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era because
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increasing difficulty of training progress,
while
governments by providing financial
aids
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or regulative benefits and universities
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using other evaluation methods can both help to address the issue, leading to enough citizens who want to contribute their effort on the education on the next generation.
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