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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and somedifferent kinds of meat ina European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and somedifferent kinds of meat ina European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef,
lamb
,
chicken
 and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004. In1979beefwas by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225
grams
 consumed per person per week.
Lamb
 and
chicken
 were eaten in similar quantities (around
150grams
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150 grams
),
while
 much less fish was consumed (just over 50
grams
).
However
, during
this
 25-year
period
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,period
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 the
consumption
 of beef and
lamb
 fell dramatically to approximately 100
grams
 and 55
grams
 respectively. The
consumption
 of fish
alsodeclined
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also declined
, but much less significantly to
justbelow
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just below
 50
grams
,
soalthough
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although
so although
 it remained the least popular food,
consumption
 levels were the most stable. The
consumption
 of
chicken
,
on the other hand
, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of
lamb
 in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250
grams
 per person per week.
Overall
, the graph shows how the
consumption
 of
chicken
 increased dramatically
while
 the popularity of these other foods decreased
overthe
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over the
 period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words lamb, chicken, grams, consumption with synonyms.
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