You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care

their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting

the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
This
provided bar chart explains the proportions of
time
, which were used by
fathers
,
mothers
, or both of them to introduce certain services to their
children
in a country throughout 2022.
Overall
, it can be seen that offspring was served by their parents, as;
fathers
or
mothers
helped them to do some daily living activities.
To begin
,
mothers
consumed the greatest percentage of
time
dressing their
children
, at about 75%,
whereas
the least ratio of
time
was spent by
fathers
doing the same service for them, at about 2%. But the percentage of the
time
, which was consumed by parents together dressing their
children
was nearly 29%, which was the least compared to any other activity that they do together for
children
.
In addition
to that, regarding homework,
mothers
spent about 50% of the
time
assisting them to finish it
while
it was the same ratio of
time
that was used by both parents together preparing for bed.
Moreover
, the highest percentage of the
time
, which was spent by
fathers
and
mothers
together was for playing games with their
children
approximately 70%.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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