The internet has transformed the way we live, but it has alos created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
As people are
now days
so Correct the word
nowadays
depend
Replace the word
dependent
in
Change preposition
on
internet
which has two Add an article
the internet
side
good Fix the agreement mistake
sides
as well as
bad. There are so many problems. My suggestion to solve this
problem
is describe
ablow.
Fix the infinitive
to describe
Firstly
, the internet
have
made life so easy in many ways Change the verb form
has
such
as easy and fast. Due to
the internet
the
children face Correct article usage
apply
problem
like health issues. Fix the agreement mistake
problems
Thus
, persent
should set Correct your spelling
parents
limite
for there Correct your spelling
limits
the
kids to Correct article usage
apply
use
the internet
. Due to
video game the
kids play Correct article usage
apply
less
outdoor games which affect Correct quantifier usage
fewer
ther
body. There Correct your spelling
the
their
are
even some side Change the verb form
is
effect
Fix the agreement mistake
effects
for
the environment Change preposition
on
due to
internet
. Before the Correct article usage
the internet
internet
the kids Add a comma
,internet
use
to play outside game
which Fix the agreement mistake
games
helpful
to learn more and more about really about the nation. Add a missing verb
was helpful
Governmnet
should Correct your spelling
Government
encourge
Correct your spelling
encourage
young
to play games and should provide sports facilities. Correct article usage
the young
However
, the countries should advices
the citizen to Correct your spelling
advise
advises
use
eco-friendly goods and services. Secondly
, there so
many side effects of Add a missing verb
are so
internet
Add an article
the internet
such
as harmful for
the body Change preposition
to
abd
health. Correct your spelling
and
Correct article usage
The internets
Internets
have made Fix the agreement mistake
Internet
the
people so far from each other. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, such
as if a person is setting in group
Correct article usage
a group
then
that a the
person Correct article usage
apply
whould
spend time on Correct your spelling
would
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the internet
internet
. There was Capitalize word
Internet
less
Fix the agreement mistake
fewer problems
problem
before internet
come for the groups. Correct article usage
the internet
Thirdly
, there are are
Remove the redundancy
apply
suggestion
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suggestions
such
as by taking some step
Fix the agreement mistake
steps
such
as there should be time fixed for using internet
. The Internet
should be
Change the verb form
be used
be using
use
less. Step
should be taken by even the government to solve Fix the agreement mistake
Steps
this
problem
.
To conclude
, the above information show solution and suggestion for the problem
create due to
Correct article usage
the internet
internet
.Capitalize word
Internet
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