The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in someland.
The table illustrates the information regarding how much leisure time individuals from different
age
groups spent yearly in Homeland.The data is calibrated in hours
.
Overall
,citizens in the age
group of 70+ spend the maximum hours
watching videos whereas
teenagers spend minimum hours
in the cinema.
At a fleeting glance, teenagers spend the maximum number of hours
watching videos as compared to other age
groups.The individuals belonging to 60 and 70+s spend similars hours
in socialising with 4 people
.In addition
,citizens in their 30s spend double the time socialising with 4 people
in comparison to people
belonging to the 20s who spend 150 hours
.
Furthermore
,senior citizens do not prefer to spend any time doing group exercise and sports.They only spend 25 hours
socialising with 4 people
.The teenagers spend the highest number of hours
450 hours
on doing group exercise and sport in contrast
to other age
groups.Moreover
, the public in the50s utilised 50 hours
for individual exercise.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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