The table below shows the number of kilometres passagers travelled on five types of transport in a european country in 1995,2005 and 2015.
The table illustrates information regarding the distance covered by passengers on five kinds of vehicles in a European country from 1995 to 2015.The data is calibrated in
billion
kilometres
Overall
,the maximum area was covered by bus
in 1995 whereas
in 2015 the minimum distance was travelled by bicycle.
At a fleeting glance,in 1995 less number of people travelled by air in comparison to the other two years.The number of individuals who covered distance by rail in 1995 was 38 billion
kilometres
and escalated gradually in 2015 to 60 billion
kilometres
.In addition
,8 billion
kilometres
of area were covered by air in 2005.
Probing ahead,people who travelled by bus
in 1995 showed a decline in 2015 by 14 billion
kilometres
.The bus
was more popular among the public in 1995 in contrast
to rail which was 38 billion
kilometres
.Moreover
,the bus
travelled 2 billion
kilometres
more as compared to the rail in 2005.In 2015, the motorcycle covered 6 billion
kilometres
which was the highest in comparison to bicycles.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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