The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. 

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given charts compare the destinations of UK graduates and postgraduates despite full-time jobs in the year 2008. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, graduates in the UK students were generally highest throughout the period including part-time struggle, voluntary production, additional study, and unemployment.
In contrast
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, the number of postgraduates is comparatively lower. In terms of graduates, the largest figure was a supplement study with 29,665, followed by the part-time trials was significantly lower than the first with 17,735.
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, the figure for unemployment quantity was slightly less than the second pattern at 16,235 numbers. the least amount of after-school activity was voluntary tasks with 3500.
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, as for postgraduates statistics who do part-time performance and
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study was at 2535 and 2725 respectively which were the biggest numbers in 2008.
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, unemployment was considerably higher than voluntary effort, which was the smallest number in the rest of the period by 1280,
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • distribution of activities
  • full-time employment
  • similar trends
  • significant proportion
  • further study
  • part-time work
  • unemployment
  • economic challenges
  • secure jobs
  • post-college activity
  • practical experience
  • additional education
  • volunteer work
  • personal development
  • skill enhancement
  • comparatively
  • niche skillsets
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