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The line graph presents data on vehicle theft cases in Great Britain, Sweden,
France
 and Canada from 1990 to 1999. The value of the theft is per thousand.
Overall
, car theft was the highest in Great Britain when compared to other countries
while
 Canada has the lowest.
Initially
, in 1990,
France
 has the least raid of around 5000 automobiles. Both Canada and
France
 have had a similar trend throughout the years. They have the same amount steals in the year 1993 at 5000 and 1999 at approximately 6000.
Similarly
, Sweden and
France
 have identical raids in the year 1991 at approx. 7000. Meanwhile, Sweden has an upward tendency in the given timeline, starting nearly at 8000 in 1991 and ending close to 14000 in 1999.
However
, it reaches a plateau during 1996-1998 more or less 13000. Great Britain all over the years fluctuates between 16000-20000, beginning and ending at approx. 16000 and having two peaks in 1993 and 1998 of 20000 burglaries.
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