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Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In the present day, encouraging high school
students
 to make comments or criticism of their
teachers
 is the way to improve the quality of education. But it
also
 leads to
the
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 lack of respect and discipline in the classroom. As
i
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 mentioned above,
students
 shouldn't judge
about
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their
teachers
, it will make
the
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 lack of respect and discipline.
Students
 need to observe and listen to their
teachers
. It won't
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 if
students
 criticize
teachers
 happening.
On the other hand
, Encouraging
students
 to comment on their
teachers
 is a way to improve the quality of education .
Students
 will have to think about the owner's own issue in a completely active way.
Teachers
 can
also
 adjust themselves to improve themselves more suitable for comments from the student. It can
also
 make the class more interesting, destroying the invisible wall separated between
students
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teachers
.
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,
students
 may not be the best to give commentators about the teacher but it helps the quality of education is better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regulation
  • vulnerable groups
  • age restrictions
  • censorship
  • real-life aggression
  • healthier society
  • creative freedom
  • free speech
  • artistic vision
  • cultural narratives
  • personal responsibility
  • viewing choices
  • balanced approach
  • rating systems
  • parental guidance
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