The below letter is an example of a band 9 informal letter to a friend. Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. •In your letter: Give a brief description of the business •Mention what you’d like to be there on the website. •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

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Dear Rahat, I hope

this

letter finds you well. Today I am writing you

this

letter to let you know that I have started a new Bengali fine dining restaurant in Halifax downtown. I have been very busy lately with the opening of the restaurant, it’s a unique restaurant business concept with Mughal Bengali cultural monument interior design which I have come up with, in the town. I know you are the wizard when it comes to creating a website,

therefore

I couldn’t think of anyone else for

this

job. I am looking for a type of online platform where it will have some graphical monument photos of Mughal history

as well as

some special dishes.

Moreover

, menus created by my chef should

also

be included so that they can see what we are offering them beforehand, whether they order something online or offline. One more thing, you should add a payment portal for customers who order online and can pay through the cloud to help aid them in saving their time not visiting in person for payment. I will email you some Mughal Emperor designs and art photos that can help you create the website creatively and get some idea regarding the type of website I am looking for. Looking forward to hearing back from you soon. Best Regards, Nazmul

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6 paragraphs

221 words

9.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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