Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visits culture and tourist attractions. To what extent, do you agree or disagree

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Tourism plays an imperative role when it comes to

exchange

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the

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culture with each other in today's world. It is believed by a few people that higher fees should be imposed by

government

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the government

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for foreigners

while

visiting some prominent places, whether historical or some other cultural tourist attractions.

Although

this

approach is advantageous from the

country

's perspective, it has some repercussions as well. In my opinion, the fee difference should be more considerable. The primary reason

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charging more fees from overseas visitors is that the residents have already paid the taxes to their

government

which are being utilized for the maintenance of these monuments.

Additionally

, some extra

service

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are

also

provided by the higher authorities to assist them.

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, the entrance fee for

Taj

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Mahal is Rs.500 for those who acquire language translators or tourist guides.

This

only

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makes it easier for them to comprehend the history and value of these attractions

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but

also

depicts the

speacial

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special

arrangements set

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you

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by the

government

On the other hand

, it can enormously impact the economy of a certain

country

with decremental tourism as the tourists might not visit in the future or even give recommendations to others.

Therefore

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reputation would be sabotaged.

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seemed unfair because they have already contributed enough

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the economy during their visit. At Philippine

airport

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airports

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for example

, 1500 pesos are collected as a travel tax from every person. To summarize, I would like to reiterate that

while

the money collected from tourism is for the betterment of a

country

, the

government

should be mindful when making the decision about the rate of entrance fees.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

272 words

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Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visits culture and tourist attractions. To what extent, do you agree or disagree

Include an introduction and conclusion

Building underground transport systems (subways) is the best way to deal with traffic problems in cities.

as countries gave developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes why does this happen ? how does this affect society?

Some people think that people should choose their job based on income in order to provide security for their family. Do you think money is an important factor when choosing a job? What other factors should be considered?

Write about the following topic: Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society? Give reasons for your answer.

“Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society.” To what extent do you support this view? You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.