You have heard that one of your friends will be doing voluntary work at a festival. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work

Dear Joyce, How do you do? I heard that you are going to be a voluntary
job
at a festival. I'
m
quite interested in taking part in
this
job
. I'
m
writing to inquire about the relevant content and whether I can do it. As you know, I've tried to apply for some voluntary work for my vacation. I really want to do
this
kind of
job
. Could you provide some pieces of information about where is the workplace and what type of
this
job
is? I've heard it will be held on National Day, is it right? Do you know how many volunteers they need? I highly need
this
job
to develop my personal ability, If I can join in, it will be fantastic. I'
m
wondering if they are looking for more volunteers, How can I apply for any position? I'
m
looking forward to your response kindly give me a website for
this
application. Best wishes. Tina.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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