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some people feel that entertainers such as film stars,pop musicians or sports persons are paid too much money.Do you agree or disagree?which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

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Some individuals hold a view that huge salary has been given to the people who belong to
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the entertainmemnt
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entertainmemnt
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entertainment
 industry.
However
, I agree with the opinion that there their wages are far more than these could be. There are certain other occupations where
the
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high payment must be rendered. I
beleive
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believe
 that the main reason defines celebrities are receiving extra money is that they earn money for a long period of
a
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single
work
 as they obtain funds either they just practice or perform.
For instance
, the cricket players of
Indian
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the Indian
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 team have
a
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fixed payment figures even
they
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if they
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 are merely
practicing
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practising
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 daily.
Furthermore
, entertainers receive desired payment when they perform in live concerts from the organizers.
However
,
the
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other government professionals get funds as per government rules. To illustrate it, teachers who contribute
in
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to
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 social
work
 when the politician
order
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orders
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 them,
ministers
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and ministers
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 do not provide anything for tutors' extra hours. There are few other jobs where the employees should receive a decent wage.
Firstly
, the health care workers may do
overtime
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over time
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due to
 the scarcity of staff.
Also
, they put themselves in highly infectious situations.
For example
, during pandemics,
the
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health care
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healthcare
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 employees suffer from critical communicable diseases
such
 as
,
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 Flu and Covid 19.
Moreover
, the policemen run behind the criminals
,
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 and get injured
for
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several times.
Therefore
, they may have to take leaves from their
work
 for which they do not obtain any salary or bonus. To exemplify it, one of my policeman
uncle
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uncles
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 was receiving $5000 monthly, but he had ambulated his one leg
while
 he was on his duty. These days he is getting nothing from
government
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the government
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. In conclusion, it
approve
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approves
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 the statement that celebrities are earning more income than they
work
. There are some professionals who deserve to be more
payable
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playable
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.
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