Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because people follow the same media. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? (Write 250 words.)

In the present day, the world is in the globalization era because we can connect together via social

media

such

as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, Skype, Zoom, and Microsoft Teams, and the differentiation between countries

are becoming

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decreasing. In my opinion,

this

trend

absolutely has more advantages than disadvantages of the social

media

that we normally use in

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daily life. People worldwide can learn from their homes via online platforms

such

as Zoom, Microsoft Team, and Discord, which match someone who cannot attend the onsite classroom.

In addition

,

this

platform can record online classes so that people who miss the class can review the lessons in their free time.

For example

, I applied for the English online courses

last

year, which had grammar lessons, and classmates from various nationalities. When I joined it and answered the question wrong, my classmates corrected me and I could review the lesson if I could not attend the class.

Therefore

, one of the advantages of

this

trend

is that the worldwide population gains their knowledge from anywhere and our knowledge becomes close.

Moreover

, the other pros are we can update the new clothes fashion and share our ideas for developing it in the future. Even though we are close because of modern technology, online fraud is becoming a social issue in the present day because scammers use social

media

and try to access important information

such

as deposit account passwords, dates of birth, and identification numbers and take our money. So,

this

is one of the disadvantages of

this

trend

which everyone has ever met.

For instance

, my co-worker who will attend a meeting in South Korea next month with me had ever filled in his information on the fake website, but he did not know that

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website

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were fake.

As a result

, he lost his money, 5000 Bath, and warned me about

this

problem. In conclusion, people who follow the same

media

can gain

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additional knowledge and share their

idea

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ideas

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on

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the

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online but fraud is the major problem of

this

trend

which we should

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concern

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and

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reduce

it

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. If we can eliminate

this

problem, our countries will develop

to

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better

society

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and equal together.