Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Charity
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is being used by many schools as an extracurricular
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and many children consider it a necessary experience for high
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, but I think it is not appropriate to include it in the
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at
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age. and I will explain
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disagreement later. ..
First,
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let's talk about the cost of
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events
first,
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and they don't usually come cheap; A typical example is the rescue of the Central region, which required 178 billion VND for reconstruction. Giving is a good thing but look at the fact that not all
students
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in the
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have the health and money to participate. And
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, before the age of 18, we still have to depend on our parents and are not old enough to take responsibility for what we do.
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,
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activity we should volunteer to do when we are adults, knowing how to calculate everything properly.
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when we turned 16, the high
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schedule was no longer as light and comfortable as before, but a dense schedule with extra lessons until late at night. It's a time for college prep, a collision with the world, and certainly a time for almost non-existent philanthropy.
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program
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is considered necessary, it is only for elementary and middle schools that have enough time to arrange, and high
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students
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should only be at the voluntary level. In conclusion, after presenting personal views,
charity
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is the right way for people to connect and share, but we can't force
students
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to do homework because, after all,
charity
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is like that. If we are able and willing to do it,
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true
charity
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.
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, the inclusion of unpaid activities in the general
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is something that I feel is not suitable for the age of
students
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.
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