You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • explain what you like about his new house • describe what you enjoyed most about your stay • suggest when and where you could meet next

Dear Ava, I hope you and your family are fine and healthy. Thank you so much for your kindness
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spend
wonderfull
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wonderful
time in your new house. I would like
you
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model house is
beautifull
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beautiful
and convenient because it
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to
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store, bus station,
train
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station
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it
close
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big
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depatment
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department
store just 10
minuts
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minute
walk.
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,
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most of my
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favourite
about
you
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house is the living room that
have
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lage
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large
windor
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window
glass and
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comfotable
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comfortable
arm
shair
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chair
that I can enjoy
you
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garden at the same time when I
sead
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sit
down in that room.
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